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Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2025 9:04 pm
by JollyRoger
Moving on to next installment...
Here's what I have for Episode II:
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Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2025 10:02 pm
by Speedz0r
Very nice! Only thing i can suggest is moving the middle guy on the back a little more to the left (center of the two other characters) and also have him in front of Natie. From the size of him he looks like he's the one closest to the camera.
Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2025 10:13 pm
by JollyRoger
I see what you mean, but irt’s actually not the case. They are cut from same picture (just left out anakin in that image, to use the one on the left). So Obi-Wan and Padmé are attached by the hip/sleeve as presented with no changes to their individual size.
Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2025 5:24 am
by Fidi
Nice start my friend.
I'm with speed, the positions look a bit weird. Padme is standing between Obi Wan's shoulder and his leg - he has to be carful not to move backwards his hand so he would cut of her leg then. ^^
Maybe cut out Padme completely and try a different image of Obi Wan?
On the front Obi Wan has a big shod on him. You could try to brighten up the image so that area isn't as dark anymore and then darken the bright parts on the right a bit. Or you use this image for the back and place hin behind Anakin so the shadow makes sense as it is right now.
Also Yoda gets a bit lost on the front. You could try to increase the exposure and saturation of his green skin color and his robe to get more visible separation from Anakin.
Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2025 11:40 am
by bazzah
Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2025 1:41 pm
by stampe
Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2025 7:36 pm
by JollyRoger
Ok, so
- Took away Padmé, and gave Obi-Wan a new shoulder and some of the arm.
- Added Count Dooku.
- Added a squadron of X-Wings and whatever the other space ship is called.
This back scene works better IMO (even if Anakin is holding his lightsaber in the left hand. Looked off balanced, if I kept his pose as it was).
Currently tracking down something that will work better on the front. More to follow.
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Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2025 11:34 am
by bazzah
This is much better. And I don't see a problem with Anakin holding his sabre in his left hand, as it is just a pose.
Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2025 7:00 pm
by JollyRoger
Rearranged some sh!t.
- Added Mace Windu to the back
- Moved Anakin's lightsaber to the other hand
- Added new Yoda to the back
- Moved Obi-Wan and Count Dooku to the front, making a better front.
- Added a LAAT3 to the front (Troop Carrier) to help build a scene, having the smaller air crafts deploying from the Venetor.
Hopefully this will work. Still some color/hue adjustments to do on the characters. Still a little bugged on the characters just standning there posing. No pictures of actual (and suitable) fight scenes I could find, which is odd for a movie with 'Attack' in the title, haha
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Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2025 7:24 pm
by stampe
great progress!
the space ships on the front could use some separation. what i mean is, that the x-wing is HUGE compared to the imperial cruiser since they are both
equally visible. the big ship should be further away and could use a haze layer to get some depth to the background. id even do that to the planets as
well because now it looks like they are all the same distance away. hope this makes sense
