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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2023 5:36 pm
by Bunny Dojo
There's still a bit of work to be done on this one before it's ready for WIP input, but I figured starting a thread might motivate me to actually finish it.
The text feels pretty solid, so now it's mostly a matter of the cutouts -- especially on the right -- coloring, and some stylizing.
(The movie is in color, but the limited stills are mostly b&w.)
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2023 6:18 pm
by bazzah
Lovely colouring work buddy! Does he have a black eye, or is that a shadow?
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2023 8:58 pm
by Bunny Dojo
Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Feb 21 2023, 02:18 PM) Does he have a black eye, or is that a shadow?
He has a black eye at that point, but maybe it's better without it?
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2023 9:07 pm
by Speedz0r
I like it better without the black eye. Awesome so far!
Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2023 10:21 am
by bazzah
I think aesthetically it is better without the black eye, but I haven't seen the movie. So maybe if it is relative it should stay?
Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2023 11:17 am
by sauron
Your type choices are always so good! Maybe you could add the slightest of colour to the shadows, so a hint of brown underneath him as shadows do tend to have a tiny bit of colour in them.
Also, I think it looks better without the black eye.
Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2023 2:39 pm
by stampe
Marvelous start! Can't wait to see more
Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2023 2:56 pm
by Bunny Dojo
Thanks for the comments, guys!
I ended up replacing the hillside background, so this one might not be as much work as originally anticipated.
A little more progress:
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2023 8:34 pm
by bazzah
Lovely work Tim
Is his face a little dark though? The cars, floor and his hands look like they are more exposed
Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2023 5:25 pm
by Fidi
Levely front so far!
I'm with Bazz about the tone of his face. I'd say it needs some more levels and light.
The colors of the two cars are very cool.
What about a slight inner shadow for the title? Not around every border but maybe something at the bottom of the letters?
Not sure if I'm wrong because it seems it's the original image but shoudln't the yellow car on the left be moved down a bit? The front tires should nearly be on one horizontal line, shouldn't they?
Hurry up so you're done until tuesday. This will be CotM then fore sure.
