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Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2022 1:18 pm
by Sxxo
Just rewatched this flick a couple days ago.
Hope you enjoy it :)

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2022 1:30 pm
by Speedz0r
Great start. Not so easy to inspect since it's a small image, but the red tower thing doesn't look quite right as it's faded off at the right edge.

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2022 3:41 pm
by bazzah
Nice start! I agree with Speed. It would be good to see a full sized preview:)

Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2022 10:34 am
by sauron
Looking good! Maybe you could move the tagline to the bottom of the cover and change it to all caps?

Also, Blake looks very yellow (I know it's like it in the original image as well) but maybe reduce the yellow on her?

Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2022 4:04 pm
by Sxxo
Update: refined the edge of the red tower; less 3% yellows and 3% desaturarion on Blake.
As for the tag, i tried but it dosen't feel good in the botton... will continue to play with it.

Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2022 5:51 pm
by bazzah
Nicely built image. The red buoy looks better now.

Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2022 10:25 am
by sauron
I agree, the buoy looks better now.

Personally, I feel Blake could still be less yellow... something like the attached.

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Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2022 8:01 am
by Blacksteel
Great works all the started!

Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2022 4:24 pm
by Sxxo
Hi all.
An update of the back.
Colours, elements and placement testing, but still left a couple of things to do.
I know that the shark looks odd. I don't intent to make it in perspetive, cas "this don't make any sense...not everything does, not everything as to" (doctor strange 2016 :D )

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2022 2:32 pm
by sauron
I like what you have done so far but the synopsis needs more room around the box to give it some breathing space. Also, having it set to justify is causing the big gaps between words, I would keep it left aligned.

Maybe change the colour of the barcode to green?