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I'm back to attempting to improve one of my old covers. Here is what it looks like now.
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And here is what I have so far. I tried picking a background color that matches the front better, but I don't know if it's working. Also not sure what to do with those screen shots. Any advice is appreciated!
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Post by sauron »

The back looks too flat at the moment. You could try and introduce a texture similar to the one on the front for it to match better?
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I wasn't sure how to match that texture exactly, so I added some uniform noise and then put a gaussian blur on that. Is it better?
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Post by sauron »

Is there any reason as to why you're not using a template? I feel the WB template would make it look a lot better and give more structure to it.

I'm not sure on what the resources are like but you could make a stills row and maybe have one larger image towards the top?

For the synopsis, try using a font similar to "Directed by George Cukor"
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There is no real reason that I am not using a template other than the fact that I just never have. How does this look? (I know I still have to adjust some of the items in the template)
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Much Better IMO :p
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Post by bazzah »

Yup, the template makes a big difference. I know you are still making changes, but try and reduce that synopsis font size too :)
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Thanks for all the help. I'm thinking this is done, unless anyone has any further comments?
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Personally, I would reduce the text more. Maybe increase the image and do something like this. It is your cover though, so you do what you feel happy with :)

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