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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2020 10:44 am
by bazzah
I am trying to rework some poster art, but I have been having problems with the shadows. The shadow of the can in the original is all wrong, so I removed it and added a straight forward shadow. But I am unsure if it looks right or not. I then added a matchbox with tagline, and again I would like to get opinions on the shadows please.

Original:
[attachment=44301:original.jpg]

Modified:
[attachment=44302:modified.jpg]

Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2020 2:40 pm
by Irrob
I don't see a problem with your revision. Definitely more accurate than the original. I admit my eye for detail is diminished though.

Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2020 5:04 pm
by bazzah
Thanks Rob :)

Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2020 6:03 pm
by sauron
Your version looks so much better than the original.

Should the match box shadow also be longer to match the can? I might be wrong as I’m not very good with matching shadows.

Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2020 6:41 pm
by bazzah
sauron wrote:QUOTE (sauron @ Sep 12 2020, 07:03 PM) Your version looks so much better than the original.

Should the match box shadow also be longer to match the can? I might be wrong as I’m not very good with matching shadows.
I am not too sure either. The matchbox is leaning up against the can though, so I am not sure how long the shadow should be.

Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2020 12:08 am
by ctaulbee
The can shadow might have been best where it was?

Less the spout and not quite as wide?

Because if the light source is at a high angle like it appears to be in the original ie (casting a short shadow) then with the spout located on the front like that, I doubt it would add to the shadow and most certainly the handle would not make it in...

Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2020 2:34 pm
by bazzah
Thanks :D I think I have it now.

[attachment=44308:perspectives.jpg]

Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2020 2:57 pm
by ctaulbee
That looks good to me :)

Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2020 3:04 pm
by M0vieM0nster
Maybe round the top edges of the shaddow slightly?

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2020 7:28 pm
by sauron
Looks good to me Baz :)

A bit disappointed no one noticed my pun though haha :lol: