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Posted: Wed May 20, 2020 9:58 pm
by TXron
This is another cover that i was planning on completing after Doctor Sleep, but decided to make a new cover for the shining to match Doctor sleep so this has sat on the back burner until The shining was practically almost finished.
Wanted to try and capture the propaganda look, not sure about the TT right now
Posted: Thu May 21, 2020 5:55 pm
by bazzah
Nice start
How would the TT look moved up, and aligned with the top cream bar?
Posted: Fri May 22, 2020 10:59 am
by TXron
Better ? changed the TT and added paper texture
Posted: Fri May 22, 2020 4:32 pm
by TXron
Changed the layout slightly how's this?
Posted: Fri May 22, 2020 8:18 pm
by bazzah
What about torn paper for the bottom part under the title?
Posted: Fri May 22, 2020 10:50 pm
by TXron
Better?
Posted: Sat May 23, 2020 8:43 am
by bazzah
I mean something more like this, for the paper texture
I really like the back layout too
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Posted: Sat May 23, 2020 1:40 pm
by TXron
Thanks Bazzah, okay came up with this, i like your texture on the TT being faded in places may try to replicate that
Posted: Sat May 23, 2020 3:10 pm
by bazzah
I think that works better
Posted: Sun May 24, 2020 9:44 am
by sauron
Looking good, maybe reduce the strength of the texture in the background, if you’re going for the propaganda look, a lot of posters during WW1 used simple backgrounds. You could try adding the texture over the whole cover to give an old look to it?
One thing about the back layout, I wouldn’t wrap the synopsis around the barcode, other than that looks good