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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2018 9:33 pm
by kruifdesign
New design
[attachment=38685:Death_Wish.png]
Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2018 10:01 pm
by kruifdesign
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2018 12:11 am
by VincentLupo
I like the red title.
Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2018 10:40 am
by Speedz0r
Yeah, I think the latest one looks better too

Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2018 10:43 am
by bazzah
Yeah, red for me. Nice start buddy
Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2018 7:19 pm
by sauron
Yeah the red looks good
I would suggest adjusting the kerning on the title a bit, the A and T have a gap between them and the D and E as well, make these tighter and it will look better

Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2018 11:16 pm
by kruifdesign
Update :
[attachment=38693:Death_Wishkopie.jpg]
Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2018 12:55 am
by sauron
Looks good but the synopsis is very large, this could be made smaller so you can add some quotes ?
Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2018 8:54 am
by Fidi
I'd remove that flare arround Willis and mybe try to add the flare's color to the background instead of the white color.
Then maybe reduce the levels on Willis (if the image quality makes that possible) because there are many details getting lost I think (gun for example, it's only a black chuck at the moment

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And whoat sauron said about the synopsis. I'd as well reduce the text a bit and add some quotes, ratings or even some more artwork instead.

Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2018 6:34 pm
by kruifdesign
Update :
[attachment=38713:Death_Wish.jpg]