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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2017 8:21 pm
by bazzah
It needs some more text on the front, like a tag line or actor names, but what do you think?

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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2017 9:56 pm
by sauron
I like it so far but feel like there needs to be some shadows added as they look like they're floating at the moment.

Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2017 4:16 pm
by bazzah
Thanks bud :p I forgot about them.

Added shadows, moved cars (I didn't like where they were placed), added actor names and made a few tweaks.

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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2017 5:01 pm
by sauron
That looks a lot better now :D

Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2017 7:24 pm
by bazzah
Thanks bud. Made a few more adjustments. I think the front is finished now?

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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2017 8:04 pm
by Arkflip
Not sure why you went with that tone but they don't look realistic imo... too greyish/redish? Apart from the tones, I really like the front so far :)

Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2017 9:40 pm
by sauron
I like it! Don't mind the colour tones you've gone with, maybe you could adjust it so the cover is a little darker so it doesn't look as washed out as it currently does?

Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2017 6:01 am
by Fidi
I personally like the colours as well. For me the problem is the explosion, it's looking too much like fake I think.

Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2017 10:22 am
by bazzah
Thanks for commenting guys. I was going for this washed out/grey tone look, I thought it looked good :p

Whats wrong with the explosion Fidi? Is it the heavy fire layer at the top?

Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2017 11:26 am
by Fidi
One thing is the desaturated colour. I like it but on the fire it's not really good. And the other reason is the black mission I think.
Since the background is very bright you maybe could paint some black behind? I don't know, the explosion is looking kind of weak or slack. :shrug: