Kingsman The Golden Circle

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It needs some more text on the front, like a tag line or actor names, but what do you think?

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Post by sauron »

I like it so far but feel like there needs to be some shadows added as they look like they're floating at the moment.
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Thanks bud :p I forgot about them.

Added shadows, moved cars (I didn't like where they were placed), added actor names and made a few tweaks.

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Post by sauron »

That looks a lot better now :D
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Thanks bud. Made a few more adjustments. I think the front is finished now?

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Post by Arkflip »

Not sure why you went with that tone but they don't look realistic imo... too greyish/redish? Apart from the tones, I really like the front so far :)
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Post by sauron »

I like it! Don't mind the colour tones you've gone with, maybe you could adjust it so the cover is a little darker so it doesn't look as washed out as it currently does?
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I personally like the colours as well. For me the problem is the explosion, it's looking too much like fake I think.
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Post by bazzah »

Thanks for commenting guys. I was going for this washed out/grey tone look, I thought it looked good :p

Whats wrong with the explosion Fidi? Is it the heavy fire layer at the top?
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One thing is the desaturated colour. I like it but on the fire it's not really good. And the other reason is the black mission I think.
Since the background is very bright you maybe could paint some black behind? I don't know, the explosion is looking kind of weak or slack. :shrug:
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