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I am trying to do something a bit different. What do you think of this?

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Post by sauron »

I've not seen the film yet so not sure how relevant everything is on the front but it looks good to me :) Maybe brighten the yellow on the title?
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Bazzah wrote:
QUOTE (Bazzah @ Sep 27 2017, 06:11 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I am trying to do something a bit different. What do you think of this?


Nice start (as always :) ). Have You thought about adding IronMan to the front?
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Thanks guys. I was being moaned at for using a night scene :lol: so I have changed it to day, and added Ironman back in

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Post by sauron »

I like this direction more but I feel the sky is a bit too blue and shouldn't the bits in the background get lighter when they're further away... maybe not this extreme but you get what I mean...

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Thanks bud. Made some adjustments and done most of the back

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Post by sauron »

Nice! Maybe lower the contrast on Iron Man and the dude with wings a little... Also the green background for the synopsis is too much I think and doesn't go with the rest of the colour pallete you are using.
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sauron wrote:
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Also the green background for the synopsis is too much I think and doesn't go with the rest of the colour pallete you are using.


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Post by Speedz0r »

I think it looks pretty good :) . I don't mind the sing being green, I believe that's the most common color on sings in the US?
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