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As requested, here's a Cover for Elle, I actually saw the movie myself and I can only recommend it ;)

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Very good start I'd say. The tt is really great, love it! :)

Also like the bluring of the backgound and the colours.
The only thing I could suggest is the light on the back of her haed, I think that's to much (same in he middle of her back).
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Good start
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Looking good so far.
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Looking really good!
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Post by Speedz0r »

It's a nice start, I would make the adjustments that Fido pointed out tho. Looking forward for the update :)
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Ok, made some minor changes, should look a bit more realistic now. The light reflection in her hair on the right side is on the original photo, so I actually didn't highlight it further.

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Looks better now but in my personal opinion this part of her hair is still lokking a bit unnatural, it's too much light there. So I'd try to darken this some more and lighten up the wall behind her just a bit (increase the tone of light coming from the window) so the wall is getting brighter there.
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Started with the back and I have 3 different main images and they all come with some problems :/ Don't know which one to prefer.

#1: Slightly bad quality plus there would be text (bottom left corner) to remove
#2: This pic is from the side and as I already have a side-pic of the woman on the front, something from the front would be better.
#3: While this one is frontal her pose, there's no action in the image, it's more of a dull portrait.
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Post by alienmem »

I would use neither of those images although they look good.

I' d use this one:

http://cdn.collider.com/wp-content/uploads...of-neighbor.jpg.


Or a image of her being raped.

But all #1-#3 look good.
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