Pelé: Birth of a Legend

[SherifDingo]

Started just the front any comments are welcome.

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[bazzah]

This looks good, but I am not sure about the tag and ball placement. They look out of place? I would also fade the ball and flag, to make them look more distant.

[sauron]

Good start - Maybe move the TT down so there's some breathing room?

[Speedz0r]

I really like the colors and lens flares you've used, but i'm also not sure about the different placements.

[SherifDingo]

I did some changes on the front what do you think?

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[sauron]

Looks much better now how about adding some noise to the front to match the image of Pele? See my attachment which I have over done the noise just so you can see it.

[bazzah]

The front looks good

Watch the synopsis. It looks like the font you are using doesn't have an apostrophe. Couldn t should be couldn't and Brazil s should be Brazil's. It could do with a few commas and full stops too

Oh, and it's Football not Soccer

[SherifDingo]

QUOTE (Bazzah @ Aug 13 2016, 09:49 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

The front looks good

Watch the synopsis. It looks like the font you are using doesn't have an apostrophe. Couldn t should be couldn't and Brazil s should be Brazil's. It could do with a few commas and full stops too

Oh, and it's Football not Soccer

it's me not the font

[Speedz0r]

Looks good, except for what's been mentioned, but i like the faded TT much better tho, so I say, keep the first TT style