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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 3:19 pm
by Fidi
Hi guys!
Finally I've got it done to start a new cover.
Your thought on this please?
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 4:46 pm
by Ramses
Nice start.....hehe, Fidi is back

Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 7:35 pm
by xshoty
Great start buddy, maybe just the sentence "A film by.." is a bit hard to read and the drop shadow doesnt work maybe make it in yellow ?
Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 8:14 pm
by ctaulbee
Good to have you back buddy, that top line is a tough read

Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 8:14 pm
by bazzah
Great to see you making a new cover, and great start. Only suggestion is the same as shoty. Maybe you could drop the light behind down a bit, or darken it?
Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 9:59 pm
by Spacebug
Nice to have you back...good start Chris
Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 10:09 pm
by M0vieM0nster
Good start, i am only wondering if the guy in the background is a little too prominent?
Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 10:36 pm
by sauron
Looking good! I agree with MM about the guy being too prominent, the rest of the background is blurred but he sticks out like a sore thumb.
Also the tagline at the bottom, maybe decrease the size a bit and add some space between each letter (tracking).
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 9:37 am
by Fidi
Thanks four your comments!
Some changes:
- moved down the light behind Liam so there's no problem to read the sentence anymore
- new hair for Liam (at least some parts) to fit the darker area behind him
- added some space between the letters of the tagline
- blured the guy in the subway as well so he fits the other parts of the image
[attachment=33448:Vorschau.jpg]
This was the original image for the background found on google:
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Motion blur was used on the left and right. Tryed to let it all look like it's only blured. I don't wan't the viewer to think the subway is moving (then the open door would be senceless ^^) but the focus should be on Liam. I hope this works as it is now.
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 12:06 pm
by sauron
Looking better now
How about adding a colour overlay of the blueish/grey to Liam to blend him more into the scene, like the attached.
[attachment=33450:run_all_night.jpg]