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Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2014 9:38 pm
by pytlaczek
In W.I.P. big move, then I will join.
Today I watched a movie and maybe something will try to do it.
With your help of course
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For now, a loose concept.
Maybe someone has some idea tagline?
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Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2014 11:05 pm
by ctaulbee
Like where it's going bud
Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2014 11:41 pm
by sauron
Liking it so far - maybe have the character names on the top or a tagline?
Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2014 3:19 am
by venome
Great so far! 2 lines in the trailer are 'Enter the maze' and 'Unlock the mystery' I like the second.
Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2014 8:08 am
by Fidi
Nice start, looking good bud.
Another taglines from a posters are 'Bring back hope', 'Never stop running' & 'Always be alert'.
And I agree with sauron about the cast's names on top and maybe the tagline under the title?
Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2014 8:33 am
by pytlaczek
Thanks guys!
I planned to give the tagline at the top and at the bottom of the actors. I'll see how it will look like all cut down.
Please, remove your xshoty with me!
What do you say this arrangement subtitles?
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Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2014 12:05 am
by venome
This works. Great update on the spine
Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2014 12:09 am
by sauron
Looks good to me!
Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2014 7:45 am
by Fidi
Spine is great and tagline/actors work for me as well.
Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2014 2:49 pm
by jcdesign
I love it. Keep going.