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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2014 1:50 pm
by Fidi
Hey guys! :)

Did a cover for this movie two years ago. But I don't really like it anymore. After I found a nice lightnig tutorial I've offhanded decided to do a new one.
This is where I am so far. More work to do on the front. Clean the edges of the containers and crane, stamping away these white logos on the crane and some more stuff.

[attachment=29412:Blu_ray_Elite.jpg]

Not sure about the position of the title. Or about more characters on the front. Or about the helicopters (if they are needed, to small/to big).
What are your thoughts? :)

Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2014 2:38 pm
by jcdesign
I like your version much! His left arm looks to bright compare the other, maybe the face too. Can you try to place the Title up instead and decrease the the size of Mark Wahlberg text, then move down the tagline to the dark area at the bottom.

Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2014 3:50 pm
by Zungam
Very promising start! Agree with JC regarding moving the TT up top and tagline down.

Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2014 4:18 pm
by Sxxo
Nice start but...
the text are all in grey :chin:

Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2014 4:48 pm
by ctaulbee
Nice start :)

Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2014 7:27 pm
by SherifDingo
Nice start. Agree Z and JC

Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2014 8:54 pm
by sauron
Nice start but I would decrease the size of the quote and name a lot.

Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2014 10:40 pm
by venome
I like this composition Fidi.. keep at it :)

Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2014 5:43 am
by Fidi
Thanks for your feedback. :)
I'll make these changes later on.

@ sxxo:

It's not only grey:

[attachment=29414:Detail.jpg]

But do you have something different in mind?

Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2014 9:08 am
by Spacebug
Really like it, the tt is awesome ;)