Contraband

[Fidi]

Hey guys!

Did a cover for this movie two years ago. But I don't really like it anymore. After I found a nice lightnig tutorial I've offhanded decided to do a new one.
This is where I am so far. More work to do on the front. Clean the edges of the containers and crane, stamping away these white logos on the crane and some more stuff.

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Not sure about the position of the title. Or about more characters on the front. Or about the helicopters (if they are needed, to small/to big).
What are your thoughts?

[jcdesign]

I like your version much! His left arm looks to bright compare the other, maybe the face too. Can you try to place the Title up instead and decrease the the size of Mark Wahlberg text, then move down the tagline to the dark area at the bottom.

[Zungam]

Very promising start! Agree with JC regarding moving the TT up top and tagline down.

[Sxxo]

Nice start but...
the text are all in grey :chin:

[ctaulbee]

Nice start

[SherifDingo]

Nice start. Agree Z and JC

[sauron]

Nice start but I would decrease the size of the quote and name a lot.

[venome]

I like this composition Fidi.. keep at it

[Fidi]

Thanks for your feedback.
I'll make these changes later on.

@ sxxo:

It's not only grey:

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But do you have something different in mind?

[Spacebug]

Really like it, the tt is awesome