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Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 7:19 pm
by pytlaczek
For some time think on this project. Unfortunately there is no of quality materials.
Did something will come out of it?
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Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 7:24 pm
by M0vieM0nster
Nice start, different but i think it's lacking something to bring it all together, not sure what but if your stuck for resources i have 230 high-res images for this movie
Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:58 pm
by JollyRoger
Nice start! One of my fav movies!

Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2013 3:44 am
by xshoty
Great , but i think your front is too charged reduce some effect maybe focus a bit more on will smith !
Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2013 11:48 am
by Zungam
Looks like it says "Slate" and not "State" imo. I'm not completely sold on your front, but xShoty's suggestion might help

Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2013 12:05 pm
by weyn
I do see that Will Smith is on the run from somebody, but with his underpants and gown, he looks unintentionally hilarious to me. A picture with his lawsuit would be more appropriate, I think.
Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2013 4:20 pm
by pytlaczek
:chin:
It's hard for me to understand what you write ...
In short, I have to focus on the main character Will Smith. That I understand. But I can not understand how you can give a "talking heads" to an action movie? I wanted in order to action was at the front. Why Will fleeing from the death looks ridiculous?
Must I think ...
PS: Request to MM. How have Smith in good quality - please send.

Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2013 9:59 pm
by weyn
It's his clothes that look ridiculous to me: underpanties and that gown (sort of a cape).
Posted: Mon Nov 04, 2013 4:26 am
by xshoty
Posted: Wed Nov 06, 2013 9:51 pm
by pytlaczek
Maybe this arrangement on the front? Nothing is not yet cut out.
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