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This western is a favourite of mine and one of the best of it's genre for the last decade in my opinion.

Just a small start. I've spent some time making a little scenery on the bottom and a TT so far. Will add the two main characters and perhaps a few more. Will see where it goes from here.

What do you think so far? Does the TT work?
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Not so fond of the italized letters in the TT.
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Good start! maybe to grungy. Will comment more when you place the characters.
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Apart from what JR said, i'd like to see you trying a cover without the grunge this time. At least to be different from your Django cover.

I like the TT and i assume you have plans for the left area but if not i think you need to center the title.
I'm curious to see what you'll do for this title

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Nice going. As been said already I would ease up on the grunge a bit on this one.
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i like the grunge style lol
but i'm not sure about the clock in the TT, easy to make the mistake that it's an "O" because the letter's are not centered... if you understand what i mean.
i like the font work/choice either, but because it's not centered it have less impact to me

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I agree with skar. Have you tried the clock instead of the 0 in 10? Think that would work better. Like the different take on this one. Also one of my favorite westerns.
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Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Apr 23 2013, 09:29 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This western is a favourite of mine and one of the best of it's genre for the last decade in my opinion.
Will add the two main characters and perhaps a few more.

Great start Z.
Please try to put only the two main characters on front, that way you got more space.
About the TT, i think it looks real nice, appart that JR suggestion (italic).
Keep on :)
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A great start indeed!
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Nice start Z, look forward to seeing more :)
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