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Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:41 am
by xshoty
Hi guy's here's my new project for looper :D

I make the front and make a original title what you think about my start ?


Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 3:42 am
by Salsa
wow nice start, not sure about the years in the background, every thing else are great, imo.

Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 11:02 am
by Skar
:iamwithstupid:

Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 11:07 am
by rybev
I like it very much. The years look good - like an explosion of time.

Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 11:47 am
by nok
Great work! I'm not sure about the exploding years either, maybe just lower the opacity a little bit more?

Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 2:08 pm
by JollyRoger
Great start :)

Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 3:28 pm
by Spacebug
Keep the years, great start, custom tt is great ;)

Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 3:54 pm
by xshoty
Thx Guy's an update soon :)

Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 6:39 pm
by xshoty
Hi guy's here's the update i'll do the back , i know the SF box look like the cover of cirus i'm inspired of his cover for make my Sf Box. I add withe character but i really don't know if it work ? I have to work on the character on the back. Maybe i will try to change the SF box for another design.

So what you think about my cover ?

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Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 7:45 pm
by Zungam
Very nice!

Personally I prefer the first front without the two white silhouettes on the bottom. Don't think you need them :)

The back looks good, but maybe make the characters more like the front? And I also think you should flip the background behind them so the skyline is on the left. Makes it easier to read the synopsis and less "busy".