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Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:41 am
by xshoty
Hi guy's here's my new project for looper
I make the front and make a original title what you think about my start ?
Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 3:42 am
by Salsa
wow nice start, not sure about the years in the background, every thing else are great, imo.
Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 11:02 am
by Skar
Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 11:07 am
by rybev
I like it very much. The years look good - like an explosion of time.
Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 11:47 am
by nok
Great work! I'm not sure about the exploding years either, maybe just lower the opacity a little bit more?
Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 2:08 pm
by JollyRoger
Great start

Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 3:28 pm
by Spacebug
Keep the years, great start, custom tt is great

Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 3:54 pm
by xshoty
Thx Guy's an update soon

Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 6:39 pm
by xshoty
Hi guy's here's the update i'll do the back , i know the SF box look like the cover of cirus i'm inspired of his cover for make my Sf Box. I add withe character but i really don't know if it work ? I have to work on the character on the back.
Maybe i will try to change the SF box for another design.So what you think about my cover ?
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Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 7:45 pm
by Zungam
Very nice!
Personally I prefer the first front without the two white silhouettes on the bottom. Don't think you need them
The back looks good, but maybe make the characters more like the front? And I also think you should flip the background behind them so the skyline is on the left. Makes it easier to read the synopsis and less "busy".