Atlantis: The Lost Empire/Milo's Return

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One of my favorite animated movies, Atlantis: The Lost Empire, is coming to blu-ray in June with Milo's Return added on. Thought I'd try a cover. I have the front in a place I'm pretty happy with. Just starting on the back...

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Nice start. Think the Walt Disney logo on front is a bit large though, and maybe center it?
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Agreed. Nice start :)
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I'm with Z but nice start bud ! :D
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Thanks!! I went and shrunk the Disney logo and centered it. I like it much better now! Thanks again! I also added in the lightning that was on the original movie poster.

I also swapped out the Atlantis: TLE logo with the official one. I also started on the back. Replaced their grey crumpled paper on the projector screen with a parchment to make the text pop a bit more.

Now onto the middle section of the back!!!

Thanks again for the comments!
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Front looks much better now :)

The back looks very heavy with all that text. Maybe try to narrow it down a little and break up the text with some larger letters in the beginning of each synopsis, if you know what I mean?
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Very Nice so far. Good suggestion from Z
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Nice job i like it !! :D I'm with Z for the synopsis try cut it and maybe add the TT on the top of each synopsis :D
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Thank you for the great suggestions!! Here's the newest version...

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Yeah, the TT's made a huge difference! Looks much better now :)

Why B/W stills? Think it would look better with colors.
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