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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2012 11:40 pm
by driving force
Hi all
I know it needs many retouchings, and I must also add many characters but I was wondering if it was ok anyway? What do you think?
First of all I need a piece of advice about the colours to use (words & title...)
Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2012 5:46 am
by Salsa
Maybe some thing like this(colors) and maybe change the actor font for something like the tagline font or the other way around.
Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 8:56 am
by JollyRoger
How would the tagline look if it was set with the same font as the actor's names?
Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 9:25 am
by masterelit
Great start :thumbsup:
Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 1:00 pm
by yesheman
I would change the yellow color, to something more subtile.
Right now it looks like the tagline says "Whore" :P not "where". I would try JRs suggestion! Also fix the spelling, it should be Sandler not Sendler.
Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 1:51 pm
by driving force
lol :P
Update
Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 4:54 pm
by JollyRoger
Hmm, sorry don't like that tagline font - my bad! Try something with a little more comics in it.
Komika for instance
Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 1:41 am
by driving force
Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 5:41 am
by Salsa
Yes, tagline is much better.
Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 12:42 pm
by JollyRoger
I don't think the W should be overlarge. Same size as the other letters will look better IMO.
