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Hi all :)

I know it needs many retouchings, and I must also add many characters but I was wondering if it was ok anyway? What do you think? :)
First of all I need a piece of advice about the colours to use (words & title...) :)

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Maybe some thing like this(colors) and maybe change the actor font for something like the tagline font or the other way around.
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How would the tagline look if it was set with the same font as the actor's names?
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Great start :thumbsup:
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I would change the yellow color, to something more subtile.

Right now it looks like the tagline says "Whore" :P not "where". I would try JRs suggestion! Also fix the spelling, it should be Sandler not Sendler.
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lol :P

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Hmm, sorry don't like that tagline font - my bad! Try something with a little more comics in it. Komika for instance :)
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better? :)



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Yes, tagline is much better.
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:agree:

I don't think the W should be overlarge. Same size as the other letters will look better IMO.
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