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Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 7:25 pm
by frightism
Wow, haven't been doing this in a while! Hey guys!
I think I need to fix some lighting on this one. I'm not sure, It just doesn't look quite right. I am planning to add a sky soon with a moon in the grey space. I am contemplating on whether I should put the title treatment on the ground with a 3D look or above/behind the cabin. But what do you guys think so far?
Should I keep the fog?
Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 7:45 pm
by Paris
Not bad! I'd definitely go with the 3D TT
For the composition, I think the main character should be A LOT bigger because it's the most interesting thing only taking up a small portion of the cover.
Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 7:47 pm
by tyson
very nice start cant wait till the end looking awesome.
Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 7:53 pm
by frightism
Thanks guys!
Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 7:53 pm
by wessim
have to see more but i like the start
Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2012 1:33 pm
by wysmommy
Great start.
Perhaps you could find a better fog brush for the bottom? Atm it looks more like smoke.
Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 9:36 pm
by frightism
Thanks everyone, here's an update!
I added and fixed a few things. Got rid of the fog on the foreground. I blurred the fog at the bottom but I'm not very satisfied with it. Does it look any better? I just don't like the way it looks though without it there, it seems empty. I'm not sure if it's even fog at all, it could be that smoke coming out of the ground during the ritual scene.
Keep the suggestions coming though guys.
Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2012 4:33 am
by frightism
Update, last one for today prolly:
Anything guys?
Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2012 5:01 am
by Paris
Very good! How would the TT would look right behind the character?
Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2012 2:29 pm
by chefjoe
Looking Really Nice here my friend, I think maybe you should consider 3 things, 1- More blur to your front lower fog, Maybe try motion blur it still seems cigarettish to me, 2 Make the TT slightly smaller as is now it's cramped against the sides. 3. The top of the spine needs something.Maybe a pic? Remember these are just my opinions, and as I said before your cover's shaping up very nicely! Great Job my friend!