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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2012 6:23 pm
by killer999pt
Hawai Five-0 All Seasons
Starting in season 1 xD
what do you guys think?
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2012 7:13 pm
by wysmommy
Nice job!
I don't know this series so not sure if the scan lines/graph are fitting to the show, but perhaps consider fading them a little more. It seems kind of distracting (especially in some areas like behind the synopsis).
Have you considered incorporating some of the background color from the front onto the back or vice versa?
Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 8:43 am
by Nightrider
For me, this is a cop show and the front image, while good and nicely done doesn't convey COP, it makes me think SURFER
Thinking you don't need the characters names under the actors names, but that's a personal choice I think
I think that texture makes the text on the back very hard to read
The tagline on the back 'what kind of cops are you' would work better on the front IMHO
You could think about dropping the spine pic and using FIVE-O police badge instead?
Also I think whatever blend you have on him on the back isn't the right choice as it makes his tatts, part of his face and part of his arm green
Don't mean to sound harsh just my opinion mate,
Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 1:59 pm
by killer999pt
wysmommy wrote:Nice job!
I don't know this series so not sure if the scan lines/graph are fitting to the show, but perhaps consider fading them a little more. It seems kind of distracting (especially in some areas like behind the synopsis).
Have you considered incorporating some of the background color from the front onto the back or vice versa?
Thanks wysmommy. I will reduce the fill of the lines. I have, i will show in next update.
Nightrider wrote:For me, this is a cop show and the front image, while good and nicely done doesn't convey COP, it makes me think SURFER
Thinking you don't need the characters names under the actors names, but that's a personal choice I think
I think that texture makes the text on the back very hard to read
The tagline on the back 'what kind of cops are you' would work better on the front IMHO
You could think about dropping the spine pic and using FIVE-O police badge instead?
Also I think whatever blend you have on him on the back isn't the right choice as it makes his tatts, part of his face and part of his arm green
Don't mean to sound harsh just my opinion mate,
No problem my friend, criticisms are always welcome, I'm always open to suggestions.
About the front image, i didin't find any good image with "action", so i I choose this one.
About the names, i like to see this way, but like you said, is more of a personal choice.
I will reduce the pattern, to see if becomes better.
Are to talking about this badge?
http://i.imgur.com/JWskO.jpg Instead of a character picture put a badge in all covers?
Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 5:22 am
by Nightrider
cheers mate
looking forward to more of your work on this, yes that's the badge, think it could look smart on the spine
Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 7:41 am
by nok
This looks pretty cool so far! I like the water splashes around the Special Features.
Perhaps you could add some sort of faded background to your front?
Looking forward to seeing the next update
Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 5:23 pm
by killer999pt
I made a few changes in front and spine, what do you think?
Where do you think that the back tagline "cops" work in front? I try, but none of the places i put the tagline convinced me.
I'm still searching for other front image
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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 9:38 pm
by easylife
love that badge holding the season number, nice touch
Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 11:10 pm
by JollyRoger
Looking good so far
Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2012 6:28 am
by Nightrider
how does the tag look under the tt? agree with the guys above
