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Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2012 6:35 pm
by pod666
would like comments on this please.
cheers pod666
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Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2012 6:43 pm
by Droogs
This preview is no good for WIP mate, you need a flat preview.
Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2012 6:46 pm
by Zungam
Yup, it's hard to see when it's like that.
I'm not really sure what you want us to comment on... As far as I can see that's a poster with a slightly different background. There's nothing wrong in using official artwork, but maybe you should challenge yourself by making your own front from scratch?

Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2012 7:17 pm
by pod666
thanks ill edit now

Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2012 7:44 pm
by invisigoth
Not sure where you found this poster but the faces look skewed. I just did a quick google search and came up with a couple very hi res versions of this with no skewing. If you're going to use a poster I would use a nice one one!..
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Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2012 8:02 pm
by pod666
cheers invisigoth point taken
Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2012 8:28 pm
by invisigoth
pod666 wrote:cheers invisigoth point taken
Just uploaded the poster (1800x2150). Might be in unsorted till there's a category.
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Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2012 8:07 am
by pod666
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hi i totally changed it with your advice thanks for input.
pod666
Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2012 8:40 am
by Zungam
I'm glad to see you're doing your own front
A few suggestions from me:
- The pic of the main dude on front looks a bit low res. And maybe it would look better if you made him red like the others?
- I like the red splatter/grunge. Maybe add more to the front?
- Flip the spine TT so it goes the other way.
- On the back I think you should decrease the pic some and make sure your synopsis doesn't overlap it. And the synopsis shouldn't be all capital imo.
- Maybe add some SF's if you got room for it?
Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2012 9:03 am
by Droogs
Agree with all Z`s suggestions.
I`d make the red background pic on the front bigger to fill some of the black.