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Started to work on this a long time ago.

Should be doing a french version also.
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Not seen the film but solid start on the cover
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Nice work so far!

Ps I just noticed you have Tylers name on the front twice.
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That's correct, just add the 's on the title part of his name.. 'Tyler Perry's' good start Jazzy :)
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Thanks V... got that ' in place.

Here's an update
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The synopsis font, or color seems off.. just makes it look a little untidy. I'd suggest a thinner font for so much text.
White is a tough background to work with i know - check out the poster i uploaded maybe it will give you ideas :)
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A light grey synopsis should do, Jazz :) Try a condensed Helvetica. ;)
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Thanks Guys.... working on it
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Updated...
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I like the overall layout, but feel there's something missing, a bit empty perhaps... Maybe place the SF's in a cool frame or sumthing?

I also think you should decrease the size of the synopsis and increase the line spacing. Looks a bit cramped up there atm. The grey color works much better than the red btw :)
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