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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 9:04 pm
by Sxxo
While waiting to finish the Whiteout cover, i've done this...
Things to do: a sky behind the car, colour match in screen bar, text adjustments, fire effect.
Toughts please.
Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 10:20 pm
by JollyRoger
I'm liking this!
The quote looks hard to read in places, Perhaps add a darkening layer underneath?
Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 10:21 pm
by M0vieM0nster
Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 10:36 pm
by Paris
That image is perfect for a back composition
(As always) A few suggestions:
Special Features
• I don't think the transparent box is working with the black and white text. How would it look solid?
• I like the bolts in the corners man
Synopsis
• The text might need some breathing room. I might look better without a box on top of the composition.
Credits
• the legal area kind of takes too much attention. Try a grey color to keep the eye on everything else
Posted: Mon May 28, 2012 3:30 pm
by venome
Great top image and stills design
Posted: Mon May 28, 2012 3:53 pm
by delek
venome wrote:Great top image
especially the central part
Seriously, I like that, good tips from above
Posted: Mon May 28, 2012 9:40 pm
by Sxxo
delek wrote:especially the central part
Me too
Thanks for the kind comments and sugestions guys
I'll try those, but because of my poor english, i do not understand all.
For that i'll PM you Nikie.
Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 3:38 am
by Nightrider
what they said mate
Superb design overall though
Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 5:01 am
by faxon
If you feeling courageous mate I rekon you could perhaps have the flames a bit bigger, have them licking the letters of the quote and perhaps ad a few sneaky white highlights to the quote for a little "poppy-contrasty-awesomeness"
Solid design, feels a bit unordered above the synopsis, play around a bit, good start!
Edit: perhaps change places of the box and the quote?
Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 3:52 pm
by quilva
i like the back so far
