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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:40 pm
by calinutzuu
So here is my first wip this year. Been a while since posted a wip so here it is. Comments apreciated.
Front? Been trying different color schemes for the front but in the end this is what i ended up with
Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 12:06 am
by JollyRoger
Very nice! Great to you start a wip here cal
I really like the scene you've created, but to me the perspective seems a bit odd. The dark orange wall(?) seems to be more blurred than the kids which supposedly should be behind it? Also, I think the kids are too high positioned in comparison to Butler.
Looking forward to an update :arms:
Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 9:03 am
by calinutzuu
Tnx joolly for the input. In the end tried a different background. What do ya think?
Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 6:57 pm
by Paris
First version looked way better mate. The new version seems like images were used "as-is", and the first version looked like it has a very unique look.
Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 10:28 pm
by gutterballs
Yeah, the first version was more interesting, although I'd keep the "hope" tagline down at the bottom the way you have it in the second version.
Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 10:40 pm
by Sxxo
I liked the first version too.
It's only a metter of prespective, try to bring the kids to front (make them a little more bigger).
Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:37 am
by calinutzuu
Ok, so back to the first version. Blurred the kids and made them bigger. Moved the title a little. Better?
Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:46 pm
by JollyRoger
I like it! :arms:
I'd lose the guns from the TT tho. They don't really add anything - and Butler is holding the same gun, so IMO they're unneccessary. :chin:
Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 5:37 pm
by venome
Much better. The guns work for poster art but i dont feel you need them here.
Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 5:57 pm
by jcdesign
The last one looks fine, but can you sharpen up the ground, To much blur on that!