Machine Gun Preacher

[calinutzuu]

So here is my first wip this year. Been a while since posted a wip so here it is. Comments apreciated.
Front? Been trying different color schemes for the front but in the end this is what i ended up with

[JollyRoger]

Very nice! Great to you start a wip here cal

I really like the scene you've created, but to me the perspective seems a bit odd. The dark orange wall(?) seems to be more blurred than the kids which supposedly should be behind it? Also, I think the kids are too high positioned in comparison to Butler.

Looking forward to an update :arms:

[calinutzuu]

Tnx joolly for the input. In the end tried a different background. What do ya think?

[Paris]

First version looked way better mate. The new version seems like images were used "as-is", and the first version looked like it has a very unique look.

[gutterballs]

Yeah, the first version was more interesting, although I'd keep the "hope" tagline down at the bottom the way you have it in the second version.

[Sxxo]

I liked the first version too.
It's only a metter of prespective, try to bring the kids to front (make them a little more bigger).

[calinutzuu]

Ok, so back to the first version. Blurred the kids and made them bigger. Moved the title a little. Better?

[JollyRoger]

I like it! :arms:

I'd lose the guns from the TT tho. They don't really add anything - and Butler is holding the same gun, so IMO they're unneccessary. :chin:

[venome]

Much better. The guns work for poster art but i dont feel you need them here.

[jcdesign]

The last one looks fine, but can you sharpen up the ground, To much blur on that!