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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 5:37 pm
by Patres10
I started this after a request from my friend and would like to hear your opinions to it:
[attachment=18908:collection.png]
[attachment=18907:twilight_preview.png]
Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 6:39 pm
by the_dude
The spanning spine is cool
as for the back of the first twilight, for me doesn't really work to be honest. I would grab a template and build up from there (and maybe use that layout on all covers) perhaps cut some lines from the synop., or maybe it looks longer than it is? Just my thoughts
Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 6:53 pm
by Patres10
The template will be the same on all covers. Ok, than I try to rebuild the back. That was a first try. To be honest, I allways have problems with a good backdesign
Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:14 pm
by Droogs
I agree, the spanning spine looks great, and although the front is a bit plain it still works. The back for me isnt great at the mo. I think it needs more detail, theres loads of resources for these movies so dont try and fill the back with as little as possible.
lookin forward to seein these progress
cheers
Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:28 pm
by JollyRoger
Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 8:29 pm
by Patres10
Ok a new back attempt:
[attachment=18914:back1.jpg]
I try to do it so simple as possible...
Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 12:25 am
by the_dude
The top half is better, i think, everything below: the pic of the 3 ppl. and credits just don't do it for me. I think if you want to "create a template" for the other movies, you must really make version one work, to be able to incorporate future versions to blend with the first version
(still makes sense?)No problem with keeping it 'minimal', but i still miss some logo's, audiopart etc. the lower-back-layout could really benefit from some more attention, and that would be more then helpfull (and even easier maybe) for the other versions to make a complete set.
Sorry if my explanation sounds bad, don't mean it like that, i'm not the best teach around
Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 6:33 am
by Patres10
Oh, thanks for the advice. I thinked everybody can imagine how it will look like with the synopsis, but ok, here is it with the synopsis:
[attachment=18923:back2.jpg]
Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 6:36 am
by M0vieM0nster
I think i can live with that
Getting better! I would lose the personal logo and the HiRes logo though imo.
Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 4:23 pm
by bpmford
I agree this looks better!
Is there any texture to the black area?
