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Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:09 am
by JollyRoger
Always wanted to do a cover for this series, so here goes. :arms:
Still just toying with the scene. Will cutout, adjust images and so on and so forth later on.
What do you think? Worth pursuing?
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Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:24 am
by wessim
I like this setup, cool start bro

Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:05 pm
by Arkflip
Cool layout so far, let us an update

Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:49 pm
by Sxxo
Cool start JR.
A little more blue perhaps ...
Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:41 pm
by Zungam
Very nice start. Doesn't need a comma after Steven Spielberg

Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:05 pm
by JollyRoger
Thx guys - will post an update soon - completely forgot to ask - with this custom TT - or should I go with the original?Zungam wrote:Very nice start. Doesn't need a comma after Steven Spielberg
...copied from the retail box.. Where's an English teacher when you need one?? :chin:
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Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 8:27 pm
by jwshaw89
JollyRoger wrote:Thx guys - will post an update soon - completely forgot to ask - with this custom TT - or should I go with the original?
...copied from the retail box.. Where's an English teacher when you need one?? :chin:
With or without a comma is acceptable. In British English, we tend not to put a comma before 'and', but in American English a comma is generally used (as in the retail box.) The reason Americans put a comma in is to clearly denote the separate parts of a list. So either is fine.
Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 9:33 pm
by JollyRoger
Thx for clearing that up jw
Here's an update. Still have to finish off the bombardment of the beach; i.e. more water splashes and some smoke/debris/body parts.... - nah, will leave out that last one.
Comments, suggestions, please?
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Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 9:44 pm
by wessim
maybe add a touch of color in the sky. Otherwise very nice work Jr
Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2011 1:20 am
by Segunda
In my opinion, it doesnt look real to me. The size of the little boats do not match the size of the large boat in front and the distance between the large boat and the beach. They need to be larger to get everything in the right perspective.
Your start is nice and its hard to fix
Cheers buddy