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This is my first work in progress... I've been working on this one for about a day, but when I submit it, I've was told "Visible credits on front cover." I've tried submitting it with and without credits, but have gotten the same response. Any ideas? Thanks.

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The front looks pretty cool, the back is TOO loud ;)

TIPs for future cover, try to avoid a text directly over and image also dark text over a dark area. The key is to separate image from text so it is readable
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Thanks... I'll see if I can darken that back image so the letters stand out more... Any idea what "Visible credits on front cover" meant?
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most likely that the text at the bottom is too hard to read. I suggest you place a texture ore a dark solid color under the legals and credits
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Hmmm... Okay... I'll give that a try. Thanks. :jump:
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Alright... Fixed the issues. Should be up soon... Thanks for your help. :yellow:
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This is what the admins are referring to as "visible credits" - taken from the full size cover, front, bottom right.

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FYI - I saw your re-submission for approval, and I deleted it since the problem was not corrected. You need to work on cloning to get rid of those credits that are still visible in the lower right side of the front.
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Thanks. I'll try and correct the problem soon... Thank you... I will see what I can do to correct the problem. Thank you very much Fubster. I didn't even notice the credits for the longest time.
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I'd lose the DVD and Magnet logos on the front.

Can we see an update on the back, please?
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