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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 5:30 am
by Hallow-Scream
So yeah my last WIP's were uneventful, so I would really appreciate any kind of feedback for this one. Please. I've been sitting on this one for a while and I just want to get it completed.
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:13 am
by wessim
Looks great so far, very different from the rest!
maybe loose some actor names on the front so they have more room.
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 8:28 am
by bpmford
This is definitely different... and not in a bad way!
I agree about the actors names, one line would suffice...
Plus, you could move them below the TT; the space is pretty small for text at the top.
Also, I'd say lower the size of the TT on the spine too.
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:18 pm
by Relocator
The TT could use some kearning, especially between the P and the T.
This looks really interesting, and I look forward to seeing it progress!
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:53 pm
by LittleCoolDude
I gotta say, I like how this looks, agree with the rest, actors names are way to cramped up there but the idea is really cool.
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 8:44 pm
by felipe-11
Great start! I agree about the actors name's, and I'm not fully sold on the TT, but I like where it's headed.
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:12 pm
by JollyRoger
I think this is a great idea! :arms:
First thing that struck is the diffenrence in lighting between the sky and the buildings. To make the scene a bit more realistic, I think you should enhance the lighting on the buildings, to make them stand out some more. After that I'd adjsut the sky to match the new lighting, and create the light source/direction.
Looking forward to an update! :thumbsup:
Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:52 am
by Hallow-Scream
JollyRoger wrote:I think this is a great idea! :arms:
First thing that struck is the diffenrence in lighting between the sky and the buildings. To make the scene a bit more realistic, I think you should enhance the lighting on the buildings, to make them stand out some more. After that I'd adjsut the sky to match the new lighting, and create the light source/direction.
Looking forward to an update! :thumbsup:
yeah I understand about the lighting, I'm trying to figure it all out but after staring at it so long I'm having trouble deciphering the whole thing...lets see how this works out.
Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:57 am
by bpmford
That looks better, but I still think one line of names is better, just because of your space restriction... I know there is a long list of main cast in it, but it just seems too much
I made a cover for this too, and ended up restricting mine to 4 names.
Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 3:13 pm
by sauron
Love the cloud idea!... I agree with the actor names as well though.