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Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 4:53 pm
by felipe-11
Hey guys, watcha think? Like? Don't like?
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Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 5:22 pm
by ubl6612
very nice idea, nice effect and use of colors, and your layout is pretty good.
Though i have a hard time visualizing the cape. At the moment he might as well be leaning up a box.
I would also distribute the title so it fills out the Silhouette more.
Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 6:54 pm
by Kernie
Very nice start!!! I really like the layout but I do have to agree with ubl about the cape shape (although I assume it's not final?).
Glad to see someone's finally making a cover for this unpopular little film that I don't think anyone bothered to see. There isn't anything in our gallery for this movie!
Joking aside. I do like your original take on this and look forward to seeing more!
Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 8:38 pm
by Paris
Looks nice but maybe go with a white spine color
Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 9:05 pm
by M0vieM0nster
Love the front although i do agree about the cape, the spine needs work though imo. The white Blu-ray logo really doesn't stand out much.
Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 9:14 pm
by RookerDesigns
I love it.. Great concept..
As for the cape.. Maybe if you did that blue color start from the bottom left, and fill the whole cape with the blue, and fade to batman..
Also if you connect the bottom of the cape to him... So theres no gap in between baman and the cape on the bottom
Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 9:36 pm
by felipe-11
Thanks guys. I'm gonna try a few things on the cape (I like your idea Rooker), I might change it's shape entirely.
Don't worry bout that spine, I just trying out the TT.
Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 12:08 am
by Relocator
I think I'm in love. Can't wait to see what you do with the cape.
I think maybe you could slightly edit the tagline. Perhaps just "I see now what I have to become." The way it is now just seems a little clunky and wordy. Just a thought
But good god, man... I love this cover.
Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 4:04 am
by felipe-11
Really glad you like it Relocator
How's this? I tried filling the gap on the bottom with the cape like Rooker suggested but it didn't look very nice
Not sure about the tagline, I might change it back...
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 4:50 pm
by gutterballs
I actually like the cape better on the first one. I love the look of this one, Felipe! But then again, you prolly know I love clean classy-lookin' covers. I would dump the tagline though, it's too long and to me distracts from the boldness of the front image. I love where this is going, though and will become my new cover once you are done!!!