Twister

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My latest project. I have to say, the resources for this movie are not very good. Have to get a little creative on this one. :bandance:

I'm still working on the Dorothy machine's perspective.. It's been giving me a little bit of a struggle

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I think a cow would be more suitable than anything else in the air for this movie, hehe, spectactulalar start my dear.
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yeah, you have got to add a cow :) Great start!
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Fantastic, Very creative!
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Thanks guys. I will see if I can add a cow in somewhere. :giggle:

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Update. ;)

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Post by sauron »

Looking good, im not too sure about the orange text on the front on the thing in the car... maybe make it darker so it doesnt stand out as much?
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Post by bazzah »

yeah, the text doesn't look like it is on the barrel. Awesome work though. I still want a cow on the front. I remember going to Universal studios, and the attraction ride had a cow fly across in front of you....
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Post by Irrob »

The cow is on the spine and that's a very smart idea :) I agree that the Dororthy writing can be made more natural looking.
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Post by Bunny Dojo »

Nice work, very ambitious. :) The only thing that jumps out at me is the vehicle still looks a little too shiny and well lit and happy compared to the surroundings. If you could bring down the shine and the saturation just a little bit, I think you'd go really far in selling the whole composition. :)
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