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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 6:40 pm
by wessim
Yeah i think that would be better. But a very nice job on this buddy

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2013 7:06 pm
by sauron
I agree with JR - Is what I originally meant in my previous post. I would also lower the saturation of the guy on the back to match the front.
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 6:26 am
by Salsa
The spine TT will look like this then? I'm not sure it works, think it's to small?
Sauron, I lowered the saturation to something similar to the front, personaly ill think it was better before? but maybe I just have to work on the light on him? Also lowered the saturation on the synopsis background to match the paper on the front.
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:48 am
by sauron
I think you have desaturated him too much maybe something like this? Also how about having the spine like the preview below?
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:35 am
by Nightrider
Think sauron is correct bud
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 4:27 pm
by JollyRoger
Yep, he could do with a little more color - same could the two characters on the front IMO

Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 5:03 pm
by Salsa
Thanks guys.
It looks good in color, but ill also like it like this. I worked in some light an a little amount of color.
I tried the spine TT like this, as one of my first attempt and i didn't like it then, and I still not sure i'll do. Think i gonna figure something else out!
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 8:15 pm
by Zungam
Very nice work Salsa. One thing bugging me though: The credits are a bit hard to read and the bottom half seems a bit "busy" overlapping the stills, chain and Waltz.
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 9:02 pm
by Salsa
Thanks Z. Yeh still have a lot of work to do on The back, also neat to find space for The specials and thinking about splitting The synopsis into two coloms instead of how it are now.
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 9:16 pm
by Bunny Dojo
Great stuff!
For the spine, how about adding a piece of paper and then re-using the color/texture of the title from the front?