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Tried BD's suggestion. Forgot to change the "THE NEW FILM..." though, but will sort it out :)

Also moved the chain outside the frame. Looks better? This preview is at a saturation between the two, and I'm comfortable with it now :)
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Looks good Z. The chain really pops out now. The saturation also looks better - not too bright, not too dull.

Little nit picky, but how about taking 'and', 'the' and 'of' down a font size or two in the tagline? Those are just the connective words, and you really want to draw more attention to 'life', liberty', 'pursuit' and 'vengeance'.
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Looking great Z :cheers:
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Post by Segunda »

Agree with shaw, give it a try...

You are doing great at this one, Magnus... very nice!
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Very nice indeed Z!
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Rely like this one buddy. Agree with shaw take the tagline down in size.
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:drool:
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Jakob, stop drooling in my thread! :P

Appreciate the feedback, folks. Will post an update during the weekend, but still waiting for the BR info before I can finish it. If anyone stumbles across it I would be grateful for a link :)
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How's this?
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:drool:
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