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JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Sep 26 2013, 05:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Not sure about the stroke on the TT... :chin:

The white bar at the righthand side of the metal frame is way thinner than the free space to either side of your number (1) - Perhaps just leave it all red?


So I can't move one. :D
I just thought the stroke is good.
I don't watch the white bars, watched the red bars. I made them the same size and put that place. :D
I wasn't looking for symmetry, and I think leave this way. Need a little disharmony.
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As long as you're cool with a bar code, that most recent back looks fantastic to me. :cheers:
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Second season's front and spine are done. :)

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Perhaps a little more blur + transparency of the red motor color (exhaustion)?
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Perhaps a little more blur + transparency of the red motor color (exhaustion)?

That would be blue wouldn't it?
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What about now?

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better but i don't think you need it coming from under the ship, just the warp things
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I think you got it right now Cirus, even though Clint doesn't know what we're talking about! :whistle:
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JollyRoger wrote:
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I think you got it right now Cirus, even though Clint doesn't know what we're talking about! :whistle:

Cheaky sod! the back bit at the bottom is not the warp nacells or what ever they're called
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Then what about now?

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