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Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 4:01 pm
by Arkflip
Great update! I'm with JR about a 3rd still, you have some empty space to fill at the back.
Also think you need to work the leading on the quote and also on the features. Maybe something like this?
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Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 4:31 pm
by venome
Thanks ark will do
Posted: Mon May 20, 2013 12:43 pm
by venome
Settled on 2 screens and added a little more. going onto volume 2.
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Posted: Mon May 20, 2013 8:45 pm
by Sxxo
Just :P
Posted: Mon May 20, 2013 9:12 pm
by sauron
On the front I think the birds sitting on the wire could be moved to the right, so they're in line with the beam and maybe bring one down to kind of show that the birds being pulled up by the beam were sitting on the wire.
Also I know with the birds getting smaller the closer they get to the spaceship is for sense of perspective but the birds that are sitting on the wire are a similar size to what the closest bird is to the spaceship.
Posted: Mon May 20, 2013 10:07 pm
by venome
Thanks for your feedback. I've already replaced the large bird and the small birds, but really any smaller and the images start to look very distorted.. i can try something else for the bottom front.
Will try adding larger birds down bottom, but may have to leave out the large bird - decent pics are hard to find.
Posted: Wed May 22, 2013 7:21 pm
by venome
Am i getting somewhere now? (not finished rebuilding the car) I think the corn field is still annoying me, need to look through animated movie folders.
[attachment=25661:Pixar_new_front.jpg]
Posted: Wed May 22, 2013 7:31 pm
by JollyRoger
I don't mind the field so much
I think it looks good
Posted: Wed May 22, 2013 11:19 pm
by Arkflip
Everytime i look at this topic you update a better version and the previous was already fantastic! You really need to teach me (and us) how to do cutouts like yours!
Posted: Thu May 23, 2013 12:20 am
by xshoty
Very nice update bud !