Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 8:07 pm
He Ark, Don't have so much time atm bc of my work.
Hope to start working on the back soon
Hope to start working on the back soon
I think you got some good ideas here but there are at least a couple things that could use tweaking. Hawkeye's head does not match that body well. His head seems too small to me and generally just unnatural looking. I'm not saying it won't work but it just needs to be tweaked. Hulk's arm on the title treatment also doesn't seem right to me. Imagine if there were a sign behind your head, reach your shoulder up and act as if you were grabbing from behind the sign. It just doesn't work like that. Your shoulder goes up in line with your head unless your body is shifted forward. Basically what I'm saying is that if his head is going to remain in front and he is going to be breaking the TT then that portion he is grabbing needs to be brought forward for the perspective to work. Kinda like he took a chunk of it and is bringing it into the foreground. The way it is now the arm just doesn't match up with the rest of the body. Other than that I think the colors and saturations just need tweaking to make it appear they are all existing in the space.
And finally... everyone seems to like the composition so I am probably dead wrong but.... I feel like the posing of everyone is too proportional and exact. I feel like at any moment the music is going to start and they are going to break out in dance.
