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Thanks for the response, guys :)

I finally had some spare time and have worked some more with the back. The back image is a combination of several screens, brushes and stock images.

As you can see I'm just throwing some SF's in there, since the BR specs aren't available yet. Does the SF's work like that btw? Maybe decrease it some and add stills over/under it? Was also thinking about adding stills in the area to the right of the alien ship, not sure yet...

Thoughts or comments?
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Something like this perhaps?
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Post by sauron »

I really like the layout you have gone for but think the special features are too spaced out and instead of having screens top right how about a quote?
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Removed the stills and decreased the SF's. Wanna add some stills above, but not sure how yet.

Added a quote where the stills were, and also added a rocket coming from the ailien ship.
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Post by JollyRoger »

SFs looks best in post #64 IMO. I think you should cut of the lower left corner of the stills tho.
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Post by delek »

Aggre with JR, for me sf post 64, other 66
Btw, looks cool Mr.Z
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Post by Paris »

I love it! It reminds me of how creative Paramount is with their customs.

Suggestions:

Features
• make sure to make room for Universal blu-ray features (the ones in the blue box on the retails).

Composition
• Maybe have a black, circular gradient to focus the action? It looks cool!
• The quote kind of isn't working :( can you add a distant ship in it place?

Stills
• could you have them above the features?
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Post by venome »

Sounds good nike. Loving this Z :thumb:
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Post by Zungam »

Thanks guys.

- Think I'm gonna leave the SF's like this and hopefully there are enough space to fit everything in when the Blu-ray info is released.
- Removed the quote and added another alien ship. Better?
- Liked nike's suggestion about focusing the action. Instead of a gradient I tried another shape up left. Does it work like this? That way I'm also able to put in some stills which I think the back needs.
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Post by Nightrider »

Not sold 100% on the new ship yet Z, thinking you might not really need it, like the SF's, area for stills looks like it can work, looks really good mate
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