Rise of the Planet of the Apes

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Hey, nice font! Not sure it works for the quote though... Maybe, like JR suggests, I should go with the old font and all capitals.

The dark grey for the synopsis works, but it's very difficult to find a brighter grey tone for the names, without them going invisible. The background consists of the whole spectre of grey. I've tried with a brownish/grey for the names. Also added credits.
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Wow this is coming along nicely Zungam!

I think JR had a good suggestion too!
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Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Aug 17 2011, 09:38 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hey, nice font! Not sure it works for the quote though... Maybe, like JR suggests, I should go with the old font and all capitals.

Make the quote bigger and almost the entire width of the back cover. Or, use a different font, like Arial Black or something similar to the Planet font. But I definitely think the quote should be bigger.

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QUOTE (Zungam @ Aug 17 2011, 09:38 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The dark grey for the synopsis works, but it's very difficult to find a brighter grey tone for the names, without them going invisible. The background consists of the whole spectre of grey. I've tried with a brownish/grey for the names. Also added credits.

Just BOLD the actor names, don't bother changing the color at all.
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Another update:

Bolded the names and increased the quote. Also added some balancing monkeys, and stills. Couldn't find any movie related pictures of Lithgow (strange...), so used another picture I found of him. The stills aren't adjustet completely yet... How does it look?
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Nice back! The light on the monkey´s shoulder looks weird when another monkey stands behind.
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Much better! :thumb:

Although I'm not sure about using a picture of Lithgow that isn't from the movie. I'm sure something of Lithgow from Rise of the Planet of the Apes can be dug up... I'll look around. Maybe a screengrab from a TS (not that I'm endorsing piracy, but it might be the only way until you can screencap the DVD in a few months)?

EDIT: I'll see if there's anything of Lithgow in the Quicktime HD trailer as well, thus avoiding piracy completely... :D
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Looking nice! I agree with kernie, using a pic from another movie is something I wouldn't do for the screencaps. You could also take a look at the trailers and take a snapshot from there, I think he was in all the trailers I saw.

What I'm not completely on board with is the quote, it looks better with the "apes font" but it looks too boring all in single line. How about placing it a little like the TT? Say in two or three lines instead of one, with the long P's and L's and such? Something like this perhaps (but with the apes font):
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And lower it down a bit, it's too close to the top. You might also have to rearrange the synopsis if you try that out , maybe start it next to Caesar's fist instead of above it? :D
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Here's the only shot I found of Lithgow from the trailer. It's actually a nice still, although it's not quite a "headshot" of him.

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Post by JollyRoger »

go to Apple and watch the trailer in HD - I'm sure you can grab a few stills from that. ;)
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Post by quilva »

great update m8, hope the credits were ok for you. had to make them myself ;)
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