X-Men Origins: Wolverine

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Post by sauron »

Do you think the hand looks right? I'm not too sure about it.
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Is this better?
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think this looks great.

whats your plan under the synopsis?
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Just me personally, but I think this would look SO much better if you lost the "Coming for Blood" quote on the front and went with something else. Perhaps a cast list or movie tagline. Otherwise-great stuff.
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I'm going to keep the quote on the front as it's a good quote I think.

I'm going to work on the bit under the synopsis later, will post an update soon.
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I like the quote. It's different than whatever lame taglines Fox came up with for this flick.

Not to nitpick, but I think Logan's face on the front is a bit too overexposed now. First it was too dark, now it's too bright. Tone down the exposure or tweak your gradient layers so his face isn't so "blown out."

Keep up the good work!! :D :D :D

Let's see more on the back so you can wrap this one up!
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Changed the stills, does it look better?
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I think the stills worked better the other way (and thought that they were very well done)... sorry. :(

Hope you didn't trash the old version...
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I got rid of the 2 images to the right as they just didn't look right. I can't seem to find images that blend in well with the 2 on the left. May have to scrap them.
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Post by Kernie »

Don't scrap the old version. It works much better than the one you've revised. If you're concerned about the two right images not working with the two on the left, alternate them, so it goes: Sabretooth/Wolverine, Wolverine claws, Gambit, and Sabretooth. Mix them up so there's not such a distinction between the ones on the left and the right.
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