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Looking really good :) Can you try lowering the opacity of the rocks in the air a little? They kind of look like they don't belong there at the moment. Also, I think Kylo Rens levels need adjusting.
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Thanks Bazz, rocks fixed.

next update... maybe something like this :

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venome wrote:QUOTE (venome @ Aug 21 2012, 12:20 AM) Mat this stunning work m8, wish it were mine :P
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It looks much better. Kylo did not fit in there.
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pytlaczek wrote:
QUOTE (pytlaczek @ Feb 18 2018, 05:38 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It looks much better. Kylo did not fit in there.


I agree about that.

But I'm not sure about that new stairs as well.
The rocks behind are totally dark but the cottage has a strong exposure. Maybe you could add some more "rocks detail" to the rocks behind the cottage?
Something like the top left corner, there it look good I think.

And I'd desaturate the new staris etc so it better fits into the other mostly black/white images (rocks, ground etc.). At the moment it's a bit to much yellow/brown compared to the rest.
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Another update, small changes:

Is Luke not too strong? I mean color, saturation and contrast?

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venome wrote:QUOTE (venome @ Aug 21 2012, 12:20 AM) Mat this stunning work m8, wish it were mine :P
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I think it's looking superb! Amazing work, buddy!
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I can't add 2 pics in one post :cry:

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venome wrote:QUOTE (venome @ Aug 21 2012, 12:20 AM) Mat this stunning work m8, wish it were mine :P
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Post by Chevalier »

Great work and collection ...

Matush wrote:
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Is Luke not too strong? I mean color, saturation and contrast?


I think so too
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Post by bazzah »

I think Like looks fine :) Great work bud!
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Post by sauron »

The shirt looks much better now Mat, sorry took so long to respond!

The updates look awesome!
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