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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 6:29 pm
by JollyRoger
:iamwithstupid: :iamwithstupid:

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:12 pm
by sauron
Looking very good!

I would work on the cloning, especially this bit - my eye was drawn to it straight away.

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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2018 9:48 am
by Speedz0r
sauron wrote:
QUOTE (sauron @ Feb 14 2018, 08:12 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looking very good!

I would work on the cloning, especially this bit - my eye was drawn to it straight away.

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Tbf, it looks like an old shirt, so I don't have any problems with it :innocent:

edit: Oh, you mean the dark marks, then I agree. Too early for me atm :whistle:

Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2018 6:21 pm
by Matush
RookerDesigns wrote:
QUOTE (RookerDesigns @ Feb 14 2018, 08:33 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looking great.. A couple things.. The floating rocks stand out too much. Colorize them a bit to match the color tone you have. Also the hilt of the Lightsaber shouldn't be blue, and the glow really wouldn't go that far down. If you google Jedi, you'll see the glow really stops at the top of the hand. Also add some shadows for the floating rocks too..

This looks Fantastic though. Love the scenery. Good work


Fixed... I hope, thanks RD , thanks guys

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sauron wrote:
QUOTE (sauron @ Feb 14 2018, 08:12 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looking very good!

I would work on the cloning, especially this bit - my eye was drawn to it straight away.

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Hey sauron buddy. Sorry m8 but I completely don't understand what is wrong there. If I can ask you to explain exactly what to pay attention to, I will be grateful.

Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2018 3:01 pm
by JollyRoger
Outstanding, Mat!

Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2018 2:58 am
by RookerDesigns
Matush wrote:
QUOTE (Matush @ Feb 15 2018, 07:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Fixed... I hope, thanks RD , thanks guys

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Hey sauron buddy. Sorry m8 but I completely don't understand what is wrong there. If I can ask you to explain exactly what to pay attention to, I will be grateful.



He means that lil piece of shirt is different from the rest. Those little random fabric movements are way different from the rest.

Also, the hilt of the saber is way to bright now. Add some contrast to that baby

Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2018 8:10 am
by Fidi
Awesome what you have put together here Mat! :)

I agree with the suggestions and don't think it would be a problem for you to do that. ^^
In my opinion the sea has too much turquoise color at the moment and I'd add some more white to the horizon (upwards from the edge of the ocean).

Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2018 11:20 am
by Matush
Thanks guys :cheers:

Fixed Rey, sea and lightsaber. maybe this time better:

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Try to add Luke skywalker (luke is poor quality for me). Looking another Luke, but here what I have for now:


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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2018 12:54 pm
by Ramses
Matush wrote:
QUOTE (Matush @ Feb 17 2018, 11:20 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
(luke is poor quality for me). Looking another Luke, but here what I have for now:

Help this on

Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2018 9:12 pm
by Matush
Thanks Ramses, I check it later m8.

Another update:

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