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Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 12:24 pm
by JollyRoger
Looking great so far, V
Only thing that cathes my eye is '13 Sensational...' - too wide spread out. You should lessen the kerning some, and make sure the text isn't too large for the box.
Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 1:47 pm
by venome
The box had moved a little - moved it back. I thought the spacing was ok, maybe it looked weird because it looking squished inside the box/blue panel?
Added some more characters and darkened the text, tweaked some other areas.
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Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 2:04 pm
by JollyRoger
Still think you should decrease the kerning a bit. But that's just me
Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 2:07 pm
by venome
I'll give it a try buddy thanks
Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 2:45 pm
by xshoty
very nice bud !!! Maybe reduce a little bit the opacity of the bird shadow
Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 3:21 pm
by venome
Will do m8
Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 12:09 am
by venome
Some more done. '13 sensational' text more compressed also lighter bird shadow. Added Geri, stills and smaller aliens.
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Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 4:28 am
by xshoty
Nice job my friend !
Just two suggestion maybe make the sky a little bit more darker cause now it's too bright IMO, the other is i'm not sure about the position of your stills pictures...
Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 1:52 pm
by JollyRoger
I think you have room for an exta still?
Nicely done!
Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 3:31 pm
by venome
Thanks guys, repositioned the text at the top and added high def text, will drop the stills a little, i don't think i'm done yet
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