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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 11:53 pm
by Zungam
Two rows imo. Looks cool! Maybe warp the text some so it follows the shape of the paper?

Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 3:23 am
by Paris
The front looks much better? Maybe brighten up the edges on his a little more? I think there is a faint black outline.

The hair looks great, too!

Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 4:21 am
by nok
Great work on the synopis. Two columns looks better but zungam is right about the shape of the text.
Maybe you could add a small black and white picture in there too?

Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 10:52 am
by easylife
i hope lex didnt mind that he was twarted. the text looks a bit crisp for a newspaper but looks good though. two rows for me too

Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 11:00 am
by JollyRoger
nikerun147 wrote:
QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Sep 24 2012, 05:23 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The front looks much better? Maybe brighten up the edges on his a little more? I think there is a faint black outline.

The hair looks great, too!

Thanks Paris, the hair came out nice IMO :cheers: You talked about edges? His shirt?

I'm saving my limited good images for some sort of montage, nok (still coming up a little short, so I am still searching), so I won't be using one on the newspaper, but I will warp the text of course, and go with two columns. Shouldn't take too long ;)

I'll drop the opacity of the text a little, EL thanks! :)

And someone said something about the front image being from another movie? (III I think?) Do you guys think I should swap the front images?

Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 11:12 am
by Patres10
Maybe it's too late, but what if the whole design look like a page of the newspaper ? All black/white ?

Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 11:30 am
by JollyRoger
Patres10 wrote:
QUOTE (Patres10 @ Sep 24 2012, 01:12 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Maybe it's too late, but what if the whole design look like a page of the newspaper ? All black/white ?

I'm not sure what you mean Patres? You mean the whole cover should look like newspaper? That's not my intention here. As explained in earlier posts I'm going for a comic book look.

Oh, and I think there's a newspaper version of Soops Returns in the gallery already ;)

Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 11:40 am
by Patres10
Yeah, I thought it should look like a newspaper ... I guess I overlooked that you want to do as a comic book. My fault ...

and I thought about something like this - http://www.hirescovers.net/gallery/display...e.php?pid=15675

Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 11:44 am
by JollyRoger
Here's the updated synopsis.

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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 2:53 pm
by JollyRoger
Worked some more on the back layout. How's this?

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