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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 6:03 am
by M0vieM0nster
Maybe it's just the light colour of his top? That could be what's making him stand out on the front? :S This is really shaping up though
This is most probably just me and the minority but with all the space you have up top on the back you could quite easily fit a... dare i say it :P BARCODE in lol but that's upto you
I don't think the synopsis nor quote needs to stretch pretty much the whole width of the back.
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:50 am
by bpmford
Really liking the look of the while cover from front to back.
I think it would be beneficial to maybe work one of those pics of the kid from jpeg in the screens to bring down the amount of robots on the cover.
A bar-code would work there, but I think a stylized one to fit the cover, not a regular boring one
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 8:09 am
by Nightrider
is it me or does his skin tone look a bit to saturated on the front and back? Compare it to the pic on the spine
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 11:54 am
by wessim
I agree with the comments already made and i realy like this
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 6:05 pm
by Droogs
thanks for the comments and suggestions guys.
heres an update with the barcode, am not sure its working though and to be honest I dont usually add them cos I`m pretty hopeless with them.
next update will include the kid in the screenshots.
cheers
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 6:52 pm
by Droogs
With the kid and girl in the screens
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:05 pm
by JollyRoger
Not so keen on the two color quote at the back top. Looks weird having a word with first letter blue the rest grey...
Also - IMHO if you are gonna sport a bar code on the cover, make it proper instead. It's just my personal opinion, but customizing it make me notice it even more than a regular one. Seeing you're not a big fan of them initially, I think you should lose it
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:53 pm
by bpmford
Oh no, might be another bar code :boxing:
I like the added bar code, but it is a bit faded ATM and looks a little off. You could also have it continue behind the robot's head and just make it an outline one instead of an imprinted steel one.
Either way, with or without it, your cover looks great!
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 8:16 pm
by Droogs
Cheers guys, I really wasnt liking the steel barcode so Ive just gone for a generic one.
Anymore suggestions or am I finished?
Cheers
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 9:11 pm
by Paris
Few things:
• the quote on the back is a dark grey on a black background, why not try a white?
• Also the Stills bar could be a little well-formated. Why not have Hugh in the center, the other characters to the side of him
Nice job on this one