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Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 9:36 am
by bazzah
Looking very professional

How about adding that tint of colour to the woman and boy behind axeman, by the synopsis?
Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 3:53 pm
by bpmford
Thanks Baz! I tried the colour to the other two, but wasn't a big fan of the result... Instead I took your idea, and added some colour back to one of the screens...
Here is my update: Screens added in and features frame updated again to remove white blood and add spider webs (way happier with that).
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 5:30 pm
by Speedz0r
I think it looks very nice now

good job!
Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 5:44 pm
by sauron
Spider web looks much better than the blood
P.S bpm I tried messaging you but your inbox is full, when uploading images could you use the upload function on the site instead of linking to photobucket please

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 5:50 pm
by bazzah
That's the one BPM, this looks fantastic!
Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 6:03 pm
by cineman
I really love your custom, But I am a little sad with the central Figure (male) and the children Boy is not well proportionned compared with the woman .
Sorry for my spelling mistakes . is not my language maternal
Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 6:29 pm
by bpmford
Thanks speed and baz!
sauron... Thanks buddy! I also will for sure use the attach function from now on, sorry for my inbox.
cineman... Thanks for the comments, I checked the character sizings, and think they are pretty accurate myself. I used some image overlays to check feature alignments, and don't see any noticeable errors in sizing. Thanks though, I appreciate you taking the time to comment

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 6:53 pm
by sauron
bpmford wrote:QUOTE (bpmford @ May 25 2016, 07:29 PM) sauron... Thanks buddy! I also will for sure use the attach function from now on, sorry for my inbox.
No problem

I have edited all your previous posts so they are all uploaded directly to the site

Posted: Wed May 25, 2016 8:04 pm
by bpmford
sauron wrote:QUOTE (sauron @ May 25 2016, 07:53 PM) No problem

I have edited all your previous posts so they are all uploaded directly to the site
Sweet, thanks sauron!
Posted: Thu May 26, 2016 3:00 am
by bpmford
Okay, so this may be done... Made some last adjustments to the TT and back images, updated the synopsis and features.
Both versions of the TT are here for some last opinions, but I may just upload both, as I like both of them for different reasons! haha
Here they are:
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