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venome wrote:
QUOTE (venome @ Jul 8 2013, 09:03 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
lmao i'll maybe fade to black towards the bottom :nunu:


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venome wrote:QUOTE (venome @ Aug 21 2012, 12:20 AM) Mat this stunning work m8, wish it were mine :P
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Great job so far m8. Sorry I didn't weigh in earlier lol I'll wait to see the next update before commenting further ;)
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Adjusted the bottom area behind the credits and added the 1st alien up top..

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This is great V. As always.
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Awesome work so far venome :thumb:
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While everything looks crisp and clear, I'm not so keen on the gun over the synopsis box. Perhaps just have the guy with the gun above the box? Just an opinion and a suggestion:)
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Great work so far mate!
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After a lot of thought i decided to ditch the Ekhart image and worked for a while on this new one.. problem solved, now i can concentrate on some aliens and a scene up top..

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Good choice, I like this direction better. Nice work
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Better! :)

In the SFs, the bullets look overlarge (just a tad) and they seem to be placed just a bit too low on the line. You can fix this in the characters palette.
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